Flash Fiction Post 67 – The Commander Comes Clean


Afternoon all.

I’m sorry that my story for this week is late. I had a small operation that threw my schedule out. But better late than never, so here is chapter 12 of the serialized novel, called The Commander Comes Clean. Please send me your comments and suggestions.

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Cheers, Dave


About Dave Macfie

Dave Macfie is the General Manager and Lead Consultant of Unique Advantage South Africa, a consulting company specializing in creating unique business advantage from purpose, analysis, insight, alignment and action. Dave’s qualifications include a double honors degree in mathematics and physics and a post graduate certificate in education. (Cum Laude) His career spans forty five years of experience in IT, business, property development and high school teaching. He lives in Johannesburg, South Africa with his wife Sandi and three of his seven children. Dave loves addressing business performance challenges, reading, writing fiction and non-fiction, gardening and spending time with his family.

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